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Daddy, please...
Contributed by
thefemalemind
on
Thursday, 11th January 2007 @ 10:23:37 PM in AEST
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Safire tears
Roll down my cheeks.
I'm falling apart...
Please wake me up from this dream.
I need you right now.
I'm falling apart...
I'll find you somehow.
Just tell me where you are.
I'm calling out to you.
What's wrong? Can't you hear me?
I'm screaming your name.
Daddy, please just come with me.
I'll never let go,
Just grab my hand tight.
Please just listen...
Everything will be alright.
Daddy, what are you doing?
Don't walk away.
Please come back.
I need you to stay.
Return that floating halo back to God,
You don't need it anymore.
Just put that blue had
Back on that you wore.
Now, just walk down these stairs with me,
The one's with gold rails.
They'll lead us home,
Where you can stay with me.
Safire tears
Still rolling down my cheeks.
None of this seems real.
Please wake me up from this dream.
Daddy, I need you.
I'm falling apart.
Please, just stay with me.
No, Daddy...please, don't go.
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Re: Daddy, please...
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by shelby on
Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 02:00:59 AM AEST
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I cry tears with you..... I am so sorry for your loss. I understand the ache so well.
This poem is captivating sends me reeling with your feelings.
There is also a special golden peacefulness within these words touched with such sorrow.
He will always be near you dear, nearer than you may think. Hold him near your heart and thought.
I wont go into a spill about time lessons the pain, just know I am thinking about you at this time.
A beautiful sentiment to your loved one.
~Michelle~ |
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