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Lost It All
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Friday, 12th January 2007 @ 10:21:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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He promised her the world on a golden plate
Said their meeting was purely fate
Then asked her to go away with him
Her chances of saying no was mighty slim
They took off in the dark of night
Underneath the full moon light
To a mansion so dark and dreary
Tired her eyes were getting bleary
It reminded her of some old scary movie
The kind her mother didn't want her to see
Inside they went dust and cobwebs galore
She wondered what was in store
He took her upstairs to his bed
Her blouse he started to shred
He laid with her and her breast did bare
She had to admit he had flare
But as she thought their love was whole
He reached in and tore out her soul
For only that which was good he wanted bad
For it was something he never had
So now adrift in a world of endless nightmares
She climbs up and down those stairs
Looking for what she had lost
Oh for love what a cost
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NoSaint
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2007-01-12 22:21:18]
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Re: Lost It All
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by shelby on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 12:08:32 AM AEST
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I remember this.
Dark and rivoting write Shari.
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Re: Lost It All
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 02:01:02 PM AEST
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Wow Shar, that was dark. I was picturing that old house and damn me, I couldn't help but wonder about the architecture of the place. I see this ghost running around a really cool old house. Tragic ending for the woman in the write, though. Good stories as always.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Lost It All
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 02:12:37 PM AEST
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Maybe its not 'better to have loved and lost...'
Startling write...Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Lost It All
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by Crow on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 10:56:19 PM AEST
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| oooh! good write, like this. Crow |
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Re: Lost It All
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 05:13:50 PM AEST
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| Nice rhyming. Good job. |
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