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Bitter Sorrow
Contributed by
wizard
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Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 12:25:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Ever will my dreams subside?
Waxing, waning, as the tide,
Whilst weeping heart and shore collide;
Searching souls both far and wide.
A tender soul I hope to find
With all my dreams and hopes aligned,
My saddened days Ill leave behind
With all my sorrowed thoughts resigned.
Such a soul Ive never known,
One to hold and call my own;
Still in my dreams I tread alone
Across a shore where hopes are sown.
In search of such a tender tune
To heal my heart, however soon,
As my bitter thoughts I prune
And lay my dreams upon the moon.
A painful truth so hard to swallow
Again in misery I wallow,
And try to shroud this bitter sorrow
Of this dying heart so hollow.
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wizard
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2007-01-13 00:25:31]
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by shelby on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 01:01:55 AM AEST
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Poured me full of emotions reading this.
Written with such talent
and try to shroud this bitter sorrow...
oh how I relate to this.
So very sad I hope you are ok.
hugssssss
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by emystar on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 06:40:40 AM AEST
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Very sad but beautifully written.
I can relate.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by Spike on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 07:23:20 AM AEST
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Such lilting thoughts and feelings are irresistable. Just a perfect rhyme scheme for this kind of reflection, and the phrasing!!!
As my bitter thoughts I prune
And lay my dreams upon the moon
[Sigh] just beautiful.
S
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by Alex23 on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 10:38:30 PM AEST
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| There's despair all over this one....but I think it's depicts accurately the effects of being downtrodden. Hope you feel better. Masterfully written. |
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 05:50:08 PM AEST
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Dearest Paul, my what a painful & sad write you have here my dear friend.
You are such a sweet soul
Whom deserves so much
I'm wishing you dear Paul
An eternity of loves touch
I feel your aching heart
Even though I am far
Warm heartfelt wishes
I send on a shooting star
Hold on to your dreams
Someday they'll come true
What your heart desires
Will finally make it's way to you...
Someday soon my dear friend you shall have the love that your heart aches for. I can so much relate to the painful verses you have ascribed. Wishing you a rainbow of love & happiness to warm your aching heart.
love n hugs from across the blue from your fan/friend,
sue m |
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by Clarity_Rising on
Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 09:57:39 PM AEST
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You’ve woven feelings of sadness
with the ocean. Very beautiful and
creative. Excellent write!
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 04:39:53 PM AEST
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Omg Wiz that is so sad.
I hope your doing ok?
I miss reading your writes and Billys.
anyways great job on this
take care ever need to talk pm me.
hugs |
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 08:40:46 AM AEST
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I am struck by some of the similarities this piece has to the latest one I have posted, though the tone of this is much sadder, they seem to stem from source.
I think there are more people than you realize that can relate to these feelings.
Artistically expressed and I hope one day soon your dreams turn happy. |
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 05:24:24 PM AEST
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| So emotional. Nicely written. |
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by heatherslostdreams on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 03:42:51 AM AEST
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Very beautiful composed feeled with so much emotion so much longing and so much hope for companionship. Great Write. Really shows a part of your feelings.
Your friend
heather
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heatherslostdreams |
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 03:15:21 PM AEST
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| I love this one!Deep and rich with emotion.Well done. Oceandreamer |
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Re: Bitter Sorrow
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by 2bpositive on
Tuesday, 9th November 2010 @ 02:21:01 AM AEST
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| very sad and heartfelt. You write well and express the inner part of what you feel. |
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