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The Price Of Living
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:38:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Sew my mouth shut with blunt needles,
so you cannot hear me screaming,
close your eyes to hide the vision,
of me lying down here bleeding.
Pull this heart out of my chest,
and find a way to keep it beating,
the only way to hurt me now,
Is to help me keep on breathing.
I wonder how to beg for mercy,
But know that you're not even listening,
Just smile as you walk on by,
Don't mind me here, just disappearing.
Pin me, place me in position,
Soon I'll hear, the crowd is cheering,
leave me there to scream and struggle,
..I guess this is the price of living.
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Re: The Price Of Living
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:53:23 PM AEST
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A cost and tax we willing pay...
Painfully read:
"...I wonder how to beg for mercy,
But know that you're not even listening,
Just smile as you walk on by,
Don't mind me here, just disappearing..."
May you shine on and on...
I say let no one overshadow your good heart and bright soul... your struggle will yield adoration.
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: The Price Of Living
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by shelby on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 12:34:13 AM AEST
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Dont mind me here , just disappearing that line is so profound !
A master write you have created here.
May the pain mend in your heart but the pen always shine.
huge hugs
~Michelle~ |
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Re: The Price Of Living
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 05:29:15 PM AEST
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A painful piece, but very vivid. I know it's tough to pen lines in such spirits, but you do it well.
I hope things brighten soon.
Andrew |
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Re: The Price Of Living
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 08:50:14 PM AEST
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Sweetie ...
*huge sighs*
I am pained so so much by reading this .. I wish there
were something I could do .. say .. anything to ease your
suffering. It's a terrible thing to feel so lost .. not knowing
how to move forward. Even a slight movement backwards
might be welcome at a time such as this. At least for
movement at all, you know?
Whoever said that "time stands still for noone," never went
through deep despair. For when in the throws of pain,
time seems exceedingly slow ..
*hugs you so tight*
-hoping for brighter tomorrows-
~Breezy |
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Re: The Price Of Living
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 09:05:02 PM AEST
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Dearest PhillyGirl~
So painfully sad your words pull at my heart strings. I read with a heavy heart. I do wish onto you much brighter tomorrows my dear friend. Your pen writes these sad moments so well. Chin up sweet heart and here's to a year filled with much love, health & happiness.
much love & huge *hugs*
sue m |
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Re: The Price Of Living
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:58:24 AM AEST
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I am coming to this late, but know that you have already gotton past this...for the most part.
You have such a way with putting yourself into the words. I am so impressed! |
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Re: The Price Of Living
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 09:08:34 AM AEST
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Amaizng.. Painful and yet I thought this was a very beautiful way express yourself... I thought you did an amazing job and I liked this poem alot... This is one of my favorites...
Take care
Christina |
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Re: The Price Of Living
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 08:38:15 AM AEST
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sadly beautiful phil...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: The Price Of Living
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 27th February 2019 @ 09:19:28 PM AEST
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Depressing in its honesty....
Poetry like this should not be forgotten.
It pains me that once of the main page its life is limited.
I hope the future has been kind to you. God bless you! |
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