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The Sun Rain Down
Contributed by
candysears
on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 10:27:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The black clouds rolls back and
Dries her tears
Open her heart as,
The sun began to shine with
A beautiful radiant glow,
The rays of sun rain down
On me
As I drift alone with the blue
Wind,
Over the endless seas I drift
While the rays of sun rain
Down on me..
I drift alone in the blue wind
Over the endless seas..
My heart filled with so much
Love..
It seems to spills over and
Connects our souls as one..
In the endless sea..
Copyright ©
candysears
... [
2007-01-14 10:27:11]
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Re: The Sun Rain Down
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 10:42:23 AM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: The Sun Rain Down
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by shelby on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 06:30:01 PM AEST
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Rays of sun rain down on me that line is so profound it moves the reader. Then the endless sea oh yes, a beautiful write you have created here.
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Re: The Sun Rain Down
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by GemmaLouiseRose on
Thursday, 17th May 2007 @ 02:21:01 AM AEST
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| magical really, its as if im painting with my mind when i read this xx |
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