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Lavender Rose
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 10:40:53 AM in AEST
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Standing on the cliff overlooking the ocean
Rich brown hair flowing behind in the wind
Lavender eyes filled with crystal tears
Her beauty was once that of a star
Her spirit had shone bright
Now dulled from deception
She watches the seagulls play
How young and fresh she had felt
How happy her life was once
Emptiness and sorrow fill her heart
Contemplating taking a step off the edge
Ending this pain that nagged within
She stepped nearer looking down at the rocks
Watching the water beating and retreating
Throwing a lavender rose into the water
Then walking away she will live to love
Another day
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Re: Lavender Rose
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by wizard on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 10:43:33 AM AEST
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very nice... the hope of love will always keep us peer of that cliff!
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Re: Lavender Rose
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by wizard on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 10:44:33 AM AEST
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| uhhh...i meant to say "PEERING off" in my comment....lol...sorry |
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Re: Lavender Rose
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:43:24 AM AEST
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Blessed Be...
Nostalgia and despair diverge when the 'will to love...' cuts new pathways...
May there ever be 'Lavender Roses' for you to reconnaissance the depths.
Bravo
Peace
Yang
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Re: Lavender Rose
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 05:56:51 PM AEST
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Shari~
My dear friend I can so much relate to the emptiness and sorrow that fill ones heart.
Throwing a lavender rose into the water
Then walking away she will live to love
Another day
I hang on too in hope that someday soon I shall love again. Thanks so much for posting this my dear friend.
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Lavender Rose
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by shelby on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 06:28:29 PM AEST
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I loved all of but the end is my favorite, I am so happy you found all these again* smiles*
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Lavender Rose
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 09:25:57 PM AEST
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this is awesome!
it's very beautifully descripted in the begining, sad in the middle and left on a more positive note. it's great!
i can really picture the scene in my mind x x |
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Re: Lavender Rose
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by Crow on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 10:34:23 PM AEST
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| I love this! see her, great image you gave me with this write..Crow |
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Re: Lavender Rose
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by EddieDean on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 01:48:15 PM AEST
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Very good work here, i can hear the water hitting the rocks below, see her standing at the edge with tears in her eyes. Oh, my heart aches for her. Nicely done, very good imagery, I will continue to read more of your work.
mike |
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Re: Lavender Rose
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by Flex4life13 on
Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 05:59:06 PM AEST
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| Love can be found in the most obvious of places, don't look too hard pal :) |
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