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6-to-1
Contributed by
skyhawk432
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Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 11:52:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Deal the bellow's face on the top-stack,
sharp-tac, smoke=attack; mind-O-matic
mayhem makes the Macrocosm: A Chance;
to dance for profit protrusions; and illogic illusions:
to find the right needle in the hedge-back.
2 is all you get, but don't you ever fret,
for five will find the finalist and
the ones who forfeit.
You got your winners and your losers
raising water to the Gods of Greed,
though do it wrong and not for long,
the loss will make your wallet bleed.
Take your walker, balker, high-ended talker;
do the Texas, Lexus-losing, out-of-practice
lummox...
The bellows make the fire hotter.
Poke it now before the embers burn away your
winning fodder.
Cool it down, now.
Copyright ©
skyhawk432
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Re: 6-to-1
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 07:59:31 PM AEST
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I liked the rock & flow of this linguistic dance...
Read a few times to apply it as a kind of universal internal forge smelting process but then I was
tossed between a beach volleyball game between the gods v. wall street and and a stony conversation between young Ron Popeil and Lyndon Johnson in philosophy class.
However it sparked a bit of fun & imagination.
Peace
Yangdantien
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