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Fresh Rose (Haiku)
Contributed by
ramfire
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Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 10:13:02 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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Fresh rose of beauty.
Alive for our enjoyment.
You're a treasured gift.
Copyright ©
ramfire
... [
2007-01-16 10:13:02]
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Re: Fresh Rose (Haiku)
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 01:52:59 PM AEST
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nice haiku. I'm not a great fan of roses..I think they're overdone and I like some other flowers more..tiny lily-of-the-valley for instance..and wildflowers..and some cactus blooms. But the haiku was good never-the-less.
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Re: Fresh Rose (Haiku)
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 03:16:04 PM AEST
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My favorite flower. You did this so well. I dont do well writing Haiku though Im trying to learn all the rules to them.
This is powerful and beautiful just as beautiful as the rose.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Fresh Rose (Haiku)
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 03:27:46 PM AEST
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A gem of a write . The rose a beautiful flower and treasured gift. Well done and keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
sue m |
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