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Breath
Contributed by
evolon
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Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 06:01:46 PM in AEST
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Breath,
Like a child to exit the womb gasping breathing in to
Life
Life, the settled security knowing there will be a tomorrow, but for whom? So we
Hope
Hope, thats in no way a doubt lay inside you while u rest
Trying
Trying, to give confidence to the fear that I am so much more than your heart could search
For
For, the compassion, intimate, desire to embrace your eyes in mines nothing man made can change my
Love
Love, me the way I feel in my bones and tickles my smiles while I am asleep
Continue
Continue, to do what ever it is that has me in tears to even think of you not by my side we, us, in pure
Form
Form, the cocoon , over my weakness and help my beauty to develop only be born a
New
New, to the bond that made life worth dying
If
If, only to dance, eternity in your sight
Like a child to exit the womb
Your illumination is blinding, you are the glow of life
For so long I have held my breath
Now I am reborn you are my guiding light!
Breath
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Re: Breath
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by spiritwind on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 06:27:34 PM AEST
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Like the way you put this together, nice style. Pretty read.
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Re: Breath
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 10:27:07 PM AEST
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This is like a poem squared.
A masons layered bricks in textured angles.
Keep Your Pen Flowing
Good Job
Peace
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