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Never Say Never. (you saved me.)
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xDiSaStErPiEcEx
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Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 06:59:13 PM in AEST
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when i most wanted to scream, i'd whisper.
when i most wanted a hug, im neglected.
when i most needed a friend, im alone.
when i most wanted a cause, im effected.
when i most needed help, i had to be independent.
always, all ways, what i need, what i want,
never ever happens, well, never say never.
but it seems like the little things, can't surpass the big ones,
and it seems like this pain will last forever.
when i most wanted you to hear me, im shut out.
when i most needed a compliment, insults fly at me.
perfection is imperfection, so does that make me perfect?
theres only so much i can do, so much i can be.
so out of all these neglections, rejections, affections,
you were the one thing that i got, that i picked right.
or did you pick me? you know you saved me, eh?
when everyone was against me, you help put up a fight.
when i most wanted a pat on the back, you gave me a hug.
when i most wanted to get away, you make the whole world dissapear.
when i most needed a friend, you were the best.
when i most wanted a shoulder to cry on, you wiped away each tear.
when i most wanted to scream, you helped me talk it out.
when i most needed to laugh, you tickled me til i would cry.
when i most wanted a cause, you gave me a purpose.
when i most wanted away from the truth, you'd tell me the cutest little lie.
when i felt incomplete, alone, hurt, neglected, effected, shattered,
you completed me, stayed with me, healed me, heard me, put me back together.
always, all ways, what i needed, what i wanted, never seemed to come,
you changed more than that, you changed me, for the better, so never say never.
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Re: Never Say Never. (you saved me.)
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 07:41:47 PM AEST
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wow this is a very hopeful write.. its very powerful and the emotions are just right there to the point straightforward.. I loved the wording .. awesome job
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Re: Never Say Never. (you saved me.)
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by amateurwriter on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 08:35:32 PM AEST
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If it is written as it was typed, then its a great type! I like the way everything is intertwined...
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