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Whispers
Contributed by
sweetkisses0741
on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 08:31:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Walking down the street.
Snow falling.
Wind blowing.
Children playing.
Voices whispering.
No one can hear them but you.
They say things.
Make you feel insane.
People staring.
Voices blaring.
Its too much
for one person to take.
Cant make out.
What theyre saying.
Its too chaotic to hear.
Disappear.
All of a sudden.
Alone.
Darkness.
Cold.
Mind is quiet.
Spirit still.
Voices stop.
Ready to heal.
Still shaky.
Still scared.
Still wondering.
Where is here.
Something hit you.
On the ground.
No ones around.
Beeps.
Sirens.
Whispers.
Fear.
Walls all around.
Restraints on wrists.
No one is here.
Only the air.
A doctor comes in.
You are scared.
You look down.
Cuts on your wrist.
Tubes in your arm.
"Your friends were just here."
Says they doctor with a beard.
They whispered in your ear.
Come back. We are scared."
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2007-01-16 20:31:15]
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Re: Whispers
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 11:07:11 PM AEST
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What hooks and teeth this piece has... Are you OK? This reminds me of a friend who collapsed from a Cerebral Vascular Accident and was slow to recover but gratefully a top doc surgeon was savior.
Excellent
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Re: Whispers
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by VR2776 on
Thursday, 3rd November 2011 @ 10:10:14 AM AEST
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| This is very real ... Its a great poem |
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