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Somber Come Day
Contributed by
axeman
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Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 11:03:13 PM in AEST
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drugabuse
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Somber Come Day
By Fernando Castillo
I had reached the top of the mountain
Obstacles were all behind me as I stood at the summit
Yet I could not believe that I had done what I thought was impossible
I was free, free to live my life
Everyday I gazed at the setting sun, as another day ended in bliss
O God, how those days of joy I truly miss
Today, ends in somber, the sun is gone
And the moon with its ominous glow
Casting a deadpan shadow on my face
I shut my eyes to escape what has become my pragmatic reality
No use, forever conscious
Vicariously I live as I watch the whole world see me die.
Copyright ©
axeman
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2007-01-16 23:03:13]
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Re: Somber Come Day
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by shelby on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 10:04:09 PM AEST
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I really liked this,
today ends in somber, the sun is gone....
one of my favorite lines. Emotive write.
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