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Contributed by
musicXisXlife
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Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 11:10:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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"I'm gonna go now," you said
after letting go of me
I mumbled a quick "okay"
but what I really meant was "no"
"no, don't leave
don't let go
don't just walk away while I'm still here
don't leave me amidst all this confusion
don't leave me to make all these decisions
don't leave."
I really meant "no."
"No, stay here with me
stay and wipe my tears
hug me till I can't cry anymore
stay, talk to me and tell me it'll all be okay
stay and make it all better
stay here with me."
I meant "no."
but all I said was "okay"
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Re: No
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 11:18:59 PM AEST
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Oh this is so emotional and touching .
Can very much relate. Well done my friend well done.
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Re: No
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 01:05:34 AM AEST
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It's so emotional and heartening poem,
Love is always painful but those who are in love must learn to enjoy the pain, because that is what love is all about.
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Re: No
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 06:12:46 PM AEST
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a very heartfelt write.. sometimes people are in our lives for a reason or season and must go on.. this is a very poweful emotional write.. good job in expression
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