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The Storm of Sadness
Contributed by
tejas9999
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Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:24:57 AM in AEST
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Death was the thunder,roared
lightning showed me my hell
the wind blew
with my soulstew
ringing for me the deaths knell.
The devils made love,
blood rained in torrents,
I cried in pain
my body blood-stained
I had sinned,
but nobody knew that,
with a cursed life
I stood in the eye of the storm.
Happiness ,love ,life
was sucked out of me.
Pain ,guilt ,depression
followed in endless.
As it entered my life,
The Storm of Sadness
- Tejas Thakker
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tejas9999
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2007-01-17 02:24:57]
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Re: The Storm of Sadness
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 10:52:06 AM AEST
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A wonderful write:
It is indeed a agonizing and painful experience to carry the guilt of sin in the heart, but there no sin that cannot be cleansed through repentance.
Please take care of yourself
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Re: The Storm of Sadness
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 07:36:56 PM AEST
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Incredible! I love the storm of thunder compared with the inner storm of self contrast within this write.
There are none of us on this earth free of sin or shortcoming. We all have done things that later on we are not so proud of but it is those times that bring forth lessons and knowledge and a support to our spirit and mind of better things to strive for.
Guilt can be an all consuming thing, something I understand and I feel ya there!
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