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the silence and emptiness of night
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dreamless Sleep
lie awake
screaming within to find an answer
to your desolation
yet all there is there is the silent darkness
and the sound of your tears and nothingness near
vampyress jenni
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:44:06 PM AEST
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| not just tugs, but rips at the heart. |
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by brew on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:47:21 PM AEST
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what a sad,but powerful write, in so few words.....Great post.....But, know it can be saved.! Thanks for sharing
Brew~ |
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 05:04:59 PM AEST
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Sinister silence seeping sadness,
Silent screams, sad sorry soul,
Sympathy silenced soul succumbs,
Sinister silence,Sleeping stole
I understand. Sue x |
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 08:57:16 PM AEST
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A concise taste of your depths and perhaps this is why a fine way to say good bye is to say sweet dreams..
May You Have the Sweetest of Dreams
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by Clarity_Rising on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:37:05 PM AEST
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Short, but direct. Excellent
word choice and display of
emotions. I really like this
poem.
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:06:49 PM AEST
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My god this is so touching and a bit frightning. Makes one appreciate who they have even more. You certainly know how to reach the heart. Beautifuly done.
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 05:56:13 PM AEST
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Jenni~ the silence in the night brings alot of things to the surface. A short, powerful & well penned write.
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:49:17 PM AEST
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Jenni, I love how you write something so simplistic but so very damn powerful. I understand these words and the terror felt,sometimes late at night when it seems the whole world has vanished, and your thoughts are the loudest damn thing you've ever heard. Good write.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 12:02:54 AM AEST
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It's an effective piece... potent... and Sue's equally abbreviated comment of "I understand" was as well, I thought. Those of us (and yes... I, too, understand) who know the pain of "silent darkness", absent even the sound of another soul, nearby, drawing air in and out of their lungs as they sleep, will shudder a bit for having read this. It's truth is all too hard to bear.
I like to think that it must make us stronger. God... I hope at least we have that.
With a heavy sigh,
~Snem |
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 08:50:38 AM AEST
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Amazing.. Short yet powerful... Great poem.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:48:13 AM AEST
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Bravo . Had a similar feeling some time ago. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by seafire on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 09:38:16 PM AEST
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Wow i really liked this poem, it remindsme of me . i i feel i have no answers to some things going on in my life this fit perfectly thanks for a great write
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by Spike on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 11:20:07 PM AEST
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Fines lines and an emotional state all too familiar.
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by zenith66 on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 09:47:25 PM AEST
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Hey vampyress, thanks for the comment, i appreciate it hugely, lovely poem here, i know the feeling, an affective poem.
Awake
The slur of distant traffic,
Ever preasant,
Caged lamps spill light across the pavement,
An unknown voice pierces the night
I awaken...
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Re: the silence and emptiness of night
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by seafire on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 10:35:00 PM AEST
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jenni,
this is so nice i love this poem you come up with such good ideas. and you know i like that part where you said there is silent darkness and the sound fo your tears and nothingness near i love that part for that is so true at times this is great keep up the good work
i love you
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