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Hidden Faces
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 09:58:31 PM in AEST
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I often wish for my life to see
I often wish for others to let me be
I often wish for the right to make a decree
I often wish for her to set me free
I often wish for her just to see me
I sit and smile as I look in past
To see the failure of all that didn't last
Hidden faces beneath the ugly mask
On the honor role is my cast
In a blur time went so fast
The future stares me in the face
I have a home but no place
Water eyes sprayed with mace
I travel in the human race
Why won't she dress in lace
Thursday, 6 June 2002
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Re: Hidden Faces
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 10:03:32 PM AEST
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I love this. The ryhme was excellent and it flowed lovely. But this stanza below is just outstanding and I love it!
I sit and smile as I look in past
To see the failure of all that didn't last
Hidden faces beneath the ugly mask
On the honor role is my cast
In a blur time went so fast
And I hope you know that If i had a popsicle right now, I would so have to give it to you for writing this awesome poem that is here before me.
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Re: Hidden Faces
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 10:09:07 PM AEST
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I've unfortunately felt this a time or two myself...
" The future stares me in the face
I have a home but no place..."
I feel ya' here...good job!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Hidden Faces
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 10:52:56 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
I disagree that clothes that makes the person as it's what's in the heart that counts.
Still in the schools I'm sure that's the way the peers look at it and that is very sad.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Hidden Faces
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:00:29 AM AEST
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| Gosh, There seem to be many unhappy people in this world. I too wish there was a clear way, yet I have faith that things happen for a reason and trust that they will work out as they should...good luck. |
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Re: Hidden Faces
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by strawberryshortcake on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 12:06:16 PM AEST
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| great flow here. yeah, we've all felt this way at sometime. the important thing is to make sure it's not 4ever. |
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