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The Beast's anticipation Beauty
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 04:01:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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fly over the moons
hearing birds sweetly croon
lovingly I dream of you
I wonder when I will meet you
it's like waiting
waiting for the sunrise
yet I know I'll fall
asleep waiting
waiting for you
but
I"ll sit here and patiently sit tight
through the nights,the years and days
oh what happy days
but they all just pass me by
I sit here waiting
and the trees couldn't bear my presence
but I only long for you
the birds too they
bypass me like I was air
i told stories to no one but
still I shared
I woke and dream and slept alone
with rose
my beauty rose
alone with me
and still waiting...
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2007-01-18 04:01:08]
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Re: The Beast's anticipation Beauty
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 12:28:23 PM AEST
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this is a very interesting write.. I like the flow of it and like the ending especially.. it sucks to wait for something.. but don't wait your life away for anyone (if that is what this is about) waiting forever isn't fair to you.. very well written
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