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cut my dreams burn it down
Contributed by
egg
on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 05:24:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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as i lay there screaming
you stand over watching me die
you throw me down like your puppet
kick me when
I'm on the ground
deadicating your life to making me scream
the choice of life death
is becoming clear
the shots you take
are going straight for the heart
on my knees
screaming at the sky
but they wont lisson to me
as i lay there screaming
you stand over watching me die
you throw me down like your puppet
kick me when
I'm on the ground
deadicating your life to making me scream
hear i am
bring on the pain
easy target
standing for the Slaughter
i sleep for relief
your nightmare is
my reality
your smashing my dreams
ignoring my screams this
will be my death coz I'm
the new enemy
so kick me coz down
cut my dreams
burn it down
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Re: cut my dreams burn it down
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nothingness on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 08:57:54 AM AEST
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wow! amazing write! wow that took my breath away...the last few lines
"your nightmare is
my reality
your smashing my dreams
ignoring my screams this
will be my death coz I'm
the new enemy
so kick me coz down
cut my dreams
burn it down"
all i can say is omg wow....that is so full of emotion and pain and just amazing so well expressed! i absolutly love it, very very well done!
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