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Waiting For You
Contributed by
Helena
on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 02:36:10 PM in AEST
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You are the sunlight on my morning pillow
a soft cashmere throw
Grandmas apple pie on Sunday
the song of a tiny blue jay
You are a hot shower to end the day
an open bottle of cabernet
poetry inside a library book
an afternoon lunch by a brook
You are a road trip in a beat-up ford
singing karaoke to the dashboard
The hope after every heartbreak
finding good in a mistake
You are getting caught in a downpour
splashing in puddles by the door
my favorite song on the radio
the gentle rapping of the crow
You are finding a rule to bend
a secret among trusted friends
the awkwardness of a first date
showing up fashionably late
You are seeing a favorite band
the dripping ice cream on my hand
having a really good dream
rewatching a beloved movie scene
You are in every mundane gem
so easy to overlook them
My happiness proclaimed
and I dont even know your name
Copyright ©
Helena
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2007-01-18 14:36:10]
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Re: Waiting For You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 03:03:34 PM AEST
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| Aw, i really liked this. I believe you did an awesome job on this. And the ending was really cute. I LOVED IT! I am still waiting for my prince charming also. And I hope he'll be just like this poem explains. Wonderful job! |
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Re: Waiting For You
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 03:24:56 PM AEST
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A good soulful piece that catches the hearts attention and shares the longing.
"...Call me but love, and I'll be new baptized; Henceforth I never will be Romeo..."
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Waiting For You
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 06:53:49 PM AEST
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| very well written, keep it up |
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