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Giving Up; Final
Contributed by
xXdeadXpoetXx
on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 06:56:28 PM in AEST
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dont know which path to follow
to find a final light
everytime i think im there
the lights go out. goodnight.
im dying quickly in a grave
i hear the dirt collapse
im feel so dumb, ive fallen
into another trap
alone here i am withered
a willow of a tree
the rotted carcus consuming
the light thats within me
pull it off, the pain here
its getting worse each day
ive turned again to darkness
i will ne'er be saved
the raft near me is drifting
farther in the black sea
my flesh is shedding quicker
whats left of me.
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2007-01-18 18:56:28]
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Re: Giving Up; Final
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 04:12:57 AM AEST
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Definately a "DARK CORNER"
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Re: Giving Up; Final
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 08:34:58 AM AEST
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it is a wonderful poem, class in its Distinctive imaginary merits. death though a creepy subject to deal, our poet friend has handled it with grace.
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