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ALways there, Just not Known
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 09:36:03 PM in AEST
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Treasured times,which lie ahead
Plentiness abroad
We look forward on all thats seen
HAPPINESS
For one who looks and can not see
Lose what the heart may be
To see and look may bring the hype
For this one here is just ONE type
SO when you look, and feel whats' seen
Dreams will be the part: which set us free
Not such a dream....
Just Reality....
LOVE
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by emystar on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 09:48:03 PM AEST
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This is a masterpeice of wisdom.
Awesome!
huggs, smiles, reality,
emy |
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 09:51:18 PM AEST
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This piece has a magnetic core that aligns all the irony, symmetrically, from an original force: love.
Well Done
Peace
AJ
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 07:24:03 AM AEST
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Awww... I liked that!
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 08:54:40 AM AEST
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I'm thinking about starting a hopeless romantics club lol. You seem like a great optimistic candidte!!
Such uplifting writes! |
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by cnstallion on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 11:03:38 AM AEST
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| this Poem reminds me of something...:-).. great write.. |
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 11:14:38 AM AEST
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Incredible and full of shining hope.
Beautiful.
Michelle |
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 05:21:53 PM AEST
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Sweet Dayna, I love your writes girl for they are penned straight from the depths of your beautiful loving heart. An uplifting write filled with such rays of hope. Love, I wish it for you my dear friend and for the rest of our fellow poets out there(hey including me, lol)
Perfectly penned. Shine on my sweet friend.
love ya,
sue m |
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 01:30:54 AM AEST
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Dearest Dayna..
First off, let me say how wonderful it was to hear
from you.. and to read your works again..
that being said, (not withstanding the prim and
proper segways to better and better things) that
this is your finest poem to date~
Your metre and rhyming scheme were gentle and perfect in every way~
and as always, your glorious and unabashed
(albeit: love unleashed through the written word) interpetation
of how to love, and BE loved,
was as beautiful and innocent as I remeber you to be my friend..
God Bless~
hoping this finds you well..
As always,
Billy
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 11:36:51 AM AEST
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A most beautiful work in your truest form of perfection. But then when wasn't it ever?.
A true lesson in life and love. Lovely writting
Dayna.
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 11:28:50 AM AEST
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You are such a great writer....one of my all-time favorites.
This is excellent...each word is perfectly penned.
Jeff |
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 10:01:45 PM AEST
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Dearest Dayna ~
I feel I must echo Billy's sentiments in this. Your heart has
always been such a treasure; so sweetly kind and gentle.
Your insight into the more simple things in life could really
teach those "less-inclined", a few things about what it is
to really LIVE. (And be terribly happy doing so!)
Beautiful, as always, hun. Hope you are well. :)
~Breezy |
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by jyssvw22 on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 04:39:31 PM AEST
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Funny how you equate happiness to love…guess its true, how can you be happy without being loved….
Nice write
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 02:47:27 PM AEST
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REALITY CAN BE A DREAM AS WELL HUN :p
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Re: ALways there, Just not Known
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 10:49:52 PM AEST
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When we are actively loving our energy vibrates at such a wonderful level. Have you ever noticed how easily you meet others when you are already "in love." You wonder where they were when you went looking.However when you were looking you were not in that vibration.
Long and short of it Stay in Love.....the vibration of love. Your Piece reminds me of this wisdom and makes my heart choose loving. |
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