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The girl I know as me
Contributed by
undiscoveredshadow
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Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 12:20:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Look at her sitting there all alone
Sitting there waiting by the phone
But as she waits, only her hopes fall
As she waits for him to call
Look at her standing there by herself
Letting go of everything she's felt
Waiting to fit into the crowd
Maybe then her mother would be proud
This girl has no one left to live for
She doesn't even want to live anymore
She has so much she wants to be
This girl I know as me
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2007-01-19 12:20:36]
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Re: The girl I know as me
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 12:46:30 PM AEST
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I can relate to this.. Actually it reminds me of myself from about 2 years ago maybe... This was good and I thought you did a good job expressing yourself..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: The girl I know as me
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by shelby on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 02:00:54 PM AEST
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Sadness I feel deep in my core reading this.
Emotive write and created nicely.
Hang in there..... there is happiness out there.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: The girl I know as me
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by lost_in_the_darkness09 on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 03:59:01 PM AEST
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this like...fits my description.....seriously...im sorry...cause i know what it feels....but nice poem...i liked it...
{rA!n} |
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Re: The girl I know as me
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by Darkangelpoet07 on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 04:46:09 PM AEST
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| Wow, I love this.. This reminds me soo much of me.. |
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