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Be A Dad
Contributed by
Alotta_Smiles
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Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 04:25:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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You make me sick
I cant stand you
Youre a waste of skin
And a loser too.
Youre stupid, youre dumb
You dont have squat.
Youre dense and brainless
You need a good swat.
Youre weak and feeble
You cant pull your weight.
Youre frail and pathetic
You make me irate.
Youre hopeless and brainless
Youre scum of the earth.
Youre nasty, self-centered.
Ohand hows your self-worth.
Youre a deadbeat, youre sad
Youre selfish and whack.
Youre not just hurting you
When you go to smoke crack.
You have a dear son
Who watches your actions.
He wants some attention
He craves your reactions.
And the saddest thing is
I hate that its true
Youre not worthy of him
But he wont leave you.
Hes taken a role
Of which one should not own
He worries and fears
His Dad wont come home.
So try and stand up
Be a man for once
Wake up, grow up
Stop being a dunce.
Look at your life
And save what you can
Start being a dad
To that young little man.
Copyright ©
Alotta_Smiles
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2007-01-19 16:25:31]
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Re: Be A Dad
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by Channing on
Friday, 19th January 2007 @ 05:21:17 PM AEST
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I love this poem, very powerful and convincing! Keep up the good work!
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Re: Be A Dad
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by Sturgezulu on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 12:12:45 AM AEST
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| powerful indeed !! strong write Alotta_Smiles ,keep it up :) |
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Re: Be A Dad
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by freespirit on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 12:24:21 AM AEST
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nothing more can be written you have said it all great write
god bless
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