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Your Kiss
Contributed by
ButchCorpuz
on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 10:20:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Of all the things in life I know Theres one thats on top of my list Something Ill never, ever let go One Ill never, ever resist
Im lost inside a passionate bliss The bliss by the sweetness of your kiss
Of all the blessings I have each day One thing Im very grateful for Something that sweeps my troubles away One that Ill keep asking for more
The one moment that I truly miss Time standing still while I feel your kiss
And of all the things in life I crave Beyond the shadow of a doubt One that Id have forever to save One I wont last a day without
No feeling could be sweeter than this The taste of falling into your kiss
~ Butch Corpuz ~ ~ 16 January 2007 ~ ~ AU 2:01 AM ~
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Re: Your Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 20th January 2007 @ 10:53:35 PM AEST (User
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The taste of falling into your kiss,
damn!!!!!! This is full of spice and the flow just carried it along. I do appreciate your writing. Get off here and get your kiss!!
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Re: Your Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 12:33:21 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful work Butch as always ain't love grand were two lucky guys.
thanks also for the comment.
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Re: Your Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 01:10:47 AM AEST (User
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Spicey is right
the taste of falling into your kiss.
very impressive |
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Re: Your Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bleedthelove on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 04:49:32 PM AEST (User
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Aww. Beautiful poem. Good job. |
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