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Darkened Her Door
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 10:58:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Darkened her door
Sister demon seed
Lost to herself
Words grow as weeds
Resentment flourishes
Fed on golden lies
Strong is the envy
Her soul slowly dies
Memories torment
A spirit loving and kind
Gone from sight
An echo in her mind
Frantically searches
For that which is right
Mirror does not show
How she must fight
Darkened her door
Now evil is her twin
Deeper into self
Looking within
Once again she will dance
Laugh and joyously sing
Once inner beauty
Again from her springs
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NoSaint
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2007-01-21 10:58:31]
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Re: Darkened Her Door
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 09:32:19 PM AEST
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Whew this piece was hard on the heart as it reaches into the darkest places on the way to hopeful redemption and self enjoyment.
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Darkened Her Door
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by Crow on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 09:40:49 PM AEST
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| good write Shari, I liked the grightness in the ending. guess thats what we strive for. Crow |
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Re: Darkened Her Door
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by dougnut on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 12:26:46 PM AEST
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Shari,
great expresion in this poem,
loved the last verse also
seemed to me like a nightmare came to its end
with Hope of brighter things to come.
great write. loved it.
Doug :-) |
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Re: Darkened Her Door
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 09:21:45 PM AEST
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ah .. a most relatable write, Shari. (hoping you are okay ..)
You've expressed the emotions of good vs evil so damn well!
I adore the third stanza, with a draw to that last line especially.
Excellent post!
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Re: Darkened Her Door
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 06:49:14 AM AEST
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"Once inner beauty
Again from her springs"
'T will most certainly happen, Shari, says the cowboy.
Captivating piece.
wabl
KenMoore
cowboy
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