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falling behind
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 10:38:00 AM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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Always reaching out
yet grasping at darkness
hoping within. yet again
only to find that dreams are lost
..lost behind the lines
scraping through dusty corners and crevices
nothing there but what used to be
no matter how hard I may try
I tumble down to where I started
so is there a point or a reasoning to get back up
to go through the motions over?
Every time I think I am finally ahead
I fall so far... behind
Vampyress Jenni
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Re: falling behind
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 12:58:26 PM AEST
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I hear ya Jen. Good write. There is always a reason to get back up sis....you do it for the most important person in your life...YOU. Thanks for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: falling behind
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 03:44:27 PM AEST
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" lost behind the lines " if i may sugest , try looking between the lines. But wory not any way, an old proverb states, " Some time's one may obtain from afar what another let's slip through there fingers close up. As always, a lovely peice of writting, most enjoyable it was to read.
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Re: falling behind
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by seafire on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 04:04:59 PM AEST
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jenni,
hey i really like this poem this says alot about everyones life in general that fall and have to get back up, i love your poetry andi always have since you started writing poetry. i still say you can be a great writer some day. this is really awesome
your momma , aka beast, aka, your flabbiness and aka bernie lol had to put all my names lol oh yea wait mare too hehe et cant forget that lol hee |
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Re: falling behind
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by Crow on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 06:50:18 PM AEST
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| I hear this write, sometimes I think if I can just get even"...good work. Crow |
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Re: falling behind
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 12:13:17 PM AEST
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This read to me like managing ones inner Daylight Savings Time at least twice a year I feel totally like I am falling behind or springing ahead...either way this questions asked:
"...so is there a point or a reasoning to get back up
to go through the motions over?...
Classic Buddhist aphorism:
Fall Down 7 Times Get Up 8
Thank You for Your Talent and Good Heart
Peace
Yang
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Re: falling behind
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by Epic on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 01:10:33 AM AEST
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| Always get back up, always strive ahead. starting back were you started isn't always the worst and sometimes it might lead you down a new path that could bring you some much more. |
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Re: falling behind
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by UrMyInspiration on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:16:00 AM AEST
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Every time I think I am finally ahead
I fall so far... behind...
This is a very beautiful line... I can relate to this alot. Your poetry is so expressive. |
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Re: falling behind
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by trueecho on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 01:59:40 PM AEST
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Jen..your poems always give me a good feeling what ever the message...ending the cycle of suffering is the most important work we have..good luck!
Mike |
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