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Have time to smile?
Contributed by
girish
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Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 10:50:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I was playing a part in Tsunami tragedy, people died unhappily
I played a part in Tsunami comedy, people died happily
Life forms a great canvas, throw all paint on it that you can
All kings are queens, they have a mustache, so one is a man
Minds bound to suspicion, exercise by jumping to conclusion
I made a fool of myself, with firm application and determination
If you don`t cook with happiness and joy, you don`t cook well
Because as per the say, all`s well that ends..Well?
True Art is making something, out of nothing and selling that
I never used to be weird, its always others who call me so, right!
I wrote a song for dental floss, had anyone`s teeth get cleaner?
Life`s boring, miserable, cause I listened to mom, dad and teacher
If people think someone`s right, they don`t really make him right
Have only first name, its the last name that makes all plight
There`s a big difference between kneeling down and bending over
The whole Universe is a joke and other things are only a quarter
More than oxygen there`s stupidity in Universe, with long shelf life
More songs are love songs, hear them and there will be no strife
Without music, time is only a boring deadline for bills to be paid
Computers can`t tell emotional story, it has no eyebrows for aid
Copyright ©
girish
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2007-01-22 10:50:15]
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Re: Have time to smile?
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 11:29:45 AM AEST
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I liked this the wisp and turns of this piece as it runs from the mundane to the extreme.
Well Done
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Re: Have time to smile?
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by ever1der on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 01:29:44 PM AEST
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| Even though the phrase: excersise by jumping to conclusion is very cliche..the rest of the poem seems bright and original. Music does add a lot to life...wish I could write an add for dental floss..wish I could write music, period. |
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