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Gemstones on White Velvet
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 12:46:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The precipitation
fell without
hesitation
Soon all would
be covered....
Encased
in ice
No longer a farm
but now a crystal kingdom
Every branch
Every bud who
thought warmer days
would bring Spring
Now captured
The wind did blow
that icy night
Branches burdened
with the weight
of the ice
Shards of crystal
breaking and falling
and this morning....
I awoke to
hundreds
no thousands of diamonds
Translucent gems
strewn about
Crystal ice prisms
reflecting in the
cold winter's sun
Gemstones on white velvet.
Written January 2007 after a weekend ice storm which the left the farm in a virtual
paradise.
Laura Horner
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
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2007-01-22 12:46:26]
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 01:01:58 PM AEST
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wow laurabean!! beautiful naturistic write.. i can imagine the sparkling snow.. I feel as if i am there watching the snow fall and the iciness of the place.. awesome job
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by ever1der on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 01:21:23 PM AEST
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| Laura this is beautiful. Did you take the pic too? I love b&w photos..it really goes well with the poem..now I feel sooo cold. (smiles) |
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 03:12:20 PM AEST
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I can hear the wind chiming and the crackle underfoot. A sheer delight to read. May the home and hearth be tender and warm for you and yours till Spring breaks through turning 'Gemstones on white velvet' to greensward.
Peace
AJ |
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by shelby on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 03:39:34 PM AEST
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Though so cold it is most beautiful. The photo and the write captured it with ease.
Beautiful my talented sis.
Michelle |
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 05:52:01 PM AEST
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Laura, the last line is poetic brilliance, my friend!!
I could picture this exactly in my mind's eye, (even without
your amazing photo), just from your words. So exsquisite
and beautifully enraptured .. the piece and the images
it evokes.
I love your nature writes. It's as if you were born to write
them. absolutely stunning ~
Days like this particular morning were made to cherish, sis.
Thank you for the mini-vacation from the cold dead world .. :)
*hugs*
~MG |
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by Crow on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 06:46:45 PM AEST
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I to love nature writes, and the pic" is great!
b/w show more detail...great work. Crow |
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by MisfitMe on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 08:00:54 PM AEST
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Once again, you translate your observations into such such vivid expression...you rock, period, end of sentence.
your poetsis~misfitme |
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 04:32:55 PM AEST
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Sweet poetic sister Laura~ What I would give to see such a beautiful sight. I have never seen snow and have always wondered what it'd be like to experience an episode of snowflakes falling from the heavenly skies. You have taken my mind on a beautiful journey and your words brought to life such a wonderous sight. The picture tops it off.
Your flare with a pen displays your beautiful poetic talent my dear friend. Thanks so much for sharing this gem of a write with us~
love, hugs n *snowflake smiles*
sue m |
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 11:55:08 AM AEST
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Laura,
A beautiful write. I love the way you depict nature. There is fantastic imagery; and what a great topic for a poem. You did an excellent job of depicting t he beauty in which you were enshrouded.
Well done my friend,
Will |
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by Dom on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 11:13:22 AM AEST
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A beautiful write with such dazzling clarity that I feel as if I am there walking in the snow. The title is superb, so vivid and sensual. A wonderfully creative write, I love nature poems!
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by PorcelainCellophane on
Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 05:20:30 AM AEST
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| Gorgeous! |
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Re: Gemstones on White Velvet
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 06:59:51 AM AEST
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ohhhh those are my favorite days! this poem just makes me sigh in happiness......
love n' hugs nessa
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