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The Drought
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 04:04:38 PM in AEST
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Some kind of connection
An intimate redirection
Of emotion
Pouring
Into hearts overflowing
With little space
To accommodate
This vast
Love to last
To the end of time
The time starts ticking
The second you become mine
Dreams of you
Do little
Are simple
Desires
Ridicule
Reduced me
Ashes in a fire
Blackened
Crisp
Brittle
Falling apart in your hands
A goodbye in an envelop
The first hello you wrote
On a napkin
With an exclamation
Point taken
Mistaken
I was the fool all along
Mouthing the words to the wrong song
Anticipating something that will never come
Strung
Myself hanging
I am let down
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2007-01-22 16:04:38]
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Re: The Drought
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 05:45:48 PM AEST
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jyss .. as usual, you can convey an emotion, (in overwhelming
abundance), with very few words. You have this amazing
ability to choose just the right word or phrase to evoke
your feelings brilliantly! .. it's stunning.
I love this one in particular. It is relatable to many hearts
methinks. A struggle intimately felt by the masses.
~Breezy
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