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Sweets
Contributed by
niccipooh
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Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 03:54:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I need you to stop doing this to meinvading my world the way you doyoure such a sneaky thingwith your easy smile and your intruding eyesI swear, you steal the life right out of meI feel so breathless, so light, so vulnerable when youre aroundleft to a state of heightened sensationmy limbs weaken slowly and surely as I try to alleviate every desire, every temptation, every yearning held inside of meas they rush to all sensory outlets that live withinoverwhelming me with such a hunger that devours all existing energymy present being is ignored, starved as I want to experience all of youhow much it hurts to be near youhow much it hurts to leave youas I cant unsee you, unfeel you, unthink youmy imagination is in a buzzmy anatomy confusedyou feel so good in my worldsatisfying every perception of you I indulgebecoming faint at the heartfaint at the fingers...the thought of you isnt good for menothing else matters when youre in my worldI wish youd free meI wish youd let me be.
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Re: Sweets
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by desire on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 04:44:30 PM AEST
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| this is beautiufu, i was feeling it |
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Re: Sweets
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by ButchCorpuz on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 06:18:38 PM AEST
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Wow! There's nothing more rattling than unexpressed love. I loved your poem. Nice flow.
Keep writing!
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Re: Sweets
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 02:11:35 PM AEST
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I feel the same about my ex's brother who I see from time to time and never talk to.. so I know what you're talking about..
I really like this line "as I cant unsee you, unfeel you, unthink you" Great job!
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