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Innocent Soldier without hope
Contributed by
crazyn
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Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 03:55:46 PM in AEST
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Here we go here we go
But you cant hide what you cant show
My mind is going to blow
And I will spread my thoughts
I will let loose those pushed down emotions
There you go there you go
But I cant hide what I cant show
Your mind is like a sieve
And those dirty tricks will cost you
There was a war to be won to boost your ego
You needed scapegoats to justify your crime
But instead I paid the time
You removed my name and called me number nine
No words of apology will soothe these wounds
Here there here there
There is blood everywhere
The light of freedom is nowhere
But I know there is a saviour somewhere
But where? But where? But where?
Copyright ©
crazyn
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2007-01-23 15:55:46]
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Re: Innocent Soldier without hope
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by niccipooh on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 03:59:18 PM AEST
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| wow...... |
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Re: Innocent Soldier without hope
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by girish on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 08:16:25 PM AEST
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i understand your feelings behind the poem. but you are not alone. read my poems "you are the way you look" and others. you will get the hope needed.
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Re: Innocent Soldier without hope
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by Saloni on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 05:06:29 AM AEST
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| sikk poem! good read.. keep posting... |
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Re: Innocent Soldier without hope
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by evangelise on
Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 01:59:55 PM AEST
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| very good , well wrote |
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