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Scob Rumq
Contributed by
skyhawk432
on
Tuesday, 23rd January 2007 @ 09:20:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Slicing sidewalk stupors
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On, the roadside strip-
mine batch; the latch-key
care-actor calls nigh.
Restore ration razors
Make, or take back side-
view act; on grin-aid
sec quenching the high.
Contact Castle Cleavers
Bring, a Mani fest-
o drum; for rock it
meme or read in shards.
Under Upstart Unto
Queer, yet here red off-
spring sung; in tongues of
miss ill fainted cards.
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2007-01-23 21:20:31]
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Re: Scob Rumq
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 12:09:34 AM AEST
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OK I like the intent as expressed in the preface. I think the title is play on prophylactics. The words are chunky and carries a bit more playfulness then expected. There is promise of genius please keep writing.
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