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Shallow
Contributed by
jaded41reason
on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 01:22:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Darkness falls across my heart
Along with this forgotten night
A tear that should fall
Is not apparent now
Slow thoughts upon what should be rest
Stutter completely through tales
A right now turned wrong
Stops all images of content
Your thought of truth
known as false all along
Comparable depths arise
Shallow is the one that prevails
Copyright ©
jaded41reason
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2007-01-24 01:22:39]
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Re: Shallow
(User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 12:12:10 PM AEST
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Haunting write.smooth flowing and errie Bravo. I enjoyed this
Thank you fer sharing
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