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No-Name
Contributed by
Kazzy1231
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Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 02:57:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I've been holding on for so long.
I guess I can't anymore because I'm not that strong.
I can't do this anymore.
This pain I cannot just ignore.
I have nothing left in this life.
I take a look at a knife.
I shake my head and remind myself that I want 2 drown.
I take a walk through the town.
I end up by the sea.
I jump in hoping this will be the end of me.
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Re: No-Name
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by Tiffyo4 on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 04:59:23 PM AEST
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| wow i have been there and done that and im still here to talk bout it if you ever need someone im here |
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Re: No-Name
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 07:05:01 PM AEST
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Boy you said it when you said it was a depressive write. Your expression is good, but I cannot condone the wanting to die deal.
I have been down too but suicide is never an answer to our problems. We must reach deep to find that inner strength and hun believe me when I tell you when you think there is nomore there is alot more we just need to reach deeper and draw from it. I have faith that you can. Life is a bumpy road we must learn to take on what comes.
Michelle
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Re: No-Name
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by doug on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 08:26:46 PM AEST
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I can't possibly understand exactly what
you've been through. I know that there are
things no one can understand unless they
have lived it. I have however had days where
I wish I could just be washed away into the sea as well. I will say only that I hope you find peace whatever you choose be it land
or sea. good luck , Truly , Doug |
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Re: No-Name
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by joe-joe on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 03:32:40 PM AEST
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| At one time or another most of us, if we will admit it have felt this very same way...writing is a nice way to get it out, without really having to go through with it...nice expression... |
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