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synth Alt destort life
Contributed by
ferasdour
on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 12:34:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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when i peer into your soul reveared
i see the darkness as i stare
deep into this mind i fear
electric nodes are very near
only to this pain of mine
shall you say the mind
of what you still uphold,
now i say unto the glare
there is more to hear
only when you feal
the malevolent cy
you will never bere
the consious that i share
only then to see
the things you say into the world
will ever be the place you see
for within this house i'v seen
a state of being within it all
electro forces through to hall
reveared for its stare
from the fear so near
but only from mine mind
i will uphold the glare you hear
the fealings you bere
i see you share
as i see what world as it pulses
though the things i'v seen only as i see
within this hall as i hate it all
the incidius nodes pules though as a malevolentcy
force within thes world we be
only as the mind sees this world
we shall precive ourselfs together
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Re: synth Alt destort life
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 06:31:57 AM AEST
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Hmmmm.... deep, interesting use of words
yes I liked it!
Dee x |
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