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I Hate You
Contributed by
Darkangelpoet07
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Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 08:54:02 PM in AEST
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The wounds of my heart will not heal.
These insecure moments will not go away.
Thoughts of us and happier times seem faded.
The pain keeps coming with every waking moment, this pain that has consumed me until I feel nothing but pain.
You even haunt my once peaceful dreams..
Why won't you just go away, let me be.
Let me be the person I once was, before you, before this.
Thoughts running through my head, thoughts of everything that I was once against now are the thoughts that make sense to deal with the pain.
Thoughts of things that I grew up believing to be insane now seem sane.
Is it because I am insane? Has this caused me to lose my mind? Have you and my thoughts of you driven me to insanity?
Maybe I am, but everything I am is a result of you. You are the one that made me this way, you are the one that made me who I was, who I am, and who I will be.
Just know that even though I still think about you and the way it use to be, I hate you with everything I am and everything I will become.
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Re: I Hate You
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by ferasdour on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 09:08:46 PM AEST
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how very nice. (obviouse sarcazm but i just felt it had to be said)
good peom though |
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Re: I Hate You
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by UrMyInspiration on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:48:46 PM AEST
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I love this emotional poem... This is very strong and raw almost...
Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: I Hate You
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 08:47:24 AM AEST
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Good poem.. I can relate... This was deep and raw..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: I Hate You
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 11:16:35 AM AEST
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| I love this poem. Awesome job. |
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Re: I Hate You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 12:13:39 PM AEST
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such a powerful and expressive piece.. you can feel the pain and anger and disappointment in this.. this has wondeful straightforward expression in it.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: I Hate You
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by Rammtuff on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 05:18:06 PM AEST
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| Sometimes relationships can almost drive you to the brink of insanity, just keep your head up and keep smiling,,, very nice writing skills. |
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Re: I Hate You
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 08:29:13 PM AEST
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Many things i could say about this poem but it would be realy saying things of the situation you write about which isn't my place to do so. With that said perhaps this poem is your best friend, you just don't know it yet. True 'tis easier said than done when one is out side the situation but in any case get rid of the hate and he shall go away for people that hurt other people are nurioushed by the respond of the person who they hurt. It quenches there sick thurst. I love the following line, " Thoughts of things that I grew up believing to be insane now seem sane" i'm just the opposite, things i grew up beleiving to be sane were nothing but illusions that i depended on. This is truly an essential peice of writting, very well crafted,
Hope thing's get better for you.
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Re: I Hate You
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by veenu on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 02:53:40 AM AEST
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i really hate you..............................
good poem i like a single line which is happier time faded.................thanx for sharing |
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Re: I Hate You
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by veenu on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 02:54:49 AM AEST
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i really hate you..............................
good poem i like a single line which is happier time faded.................thanx for sharing |
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Re: I Hate You
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 10:27:05 PM AEST
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| well done |
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