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Poison Ivy...
Contributed by
UrMyInspiration
on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:31:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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She walks with persuasion...
Her posture is tainted yet unimaginably strong...
Each strand of her hair is made from a color that does not even exist...
Her voice...
Oh, that frightening voice...
It resembles an angel singing...
Using every ounce of her angel breath...
There is a certain aura about her...
Described as a heat illuminating off of her body...
A heat that will burn the flesh right off of you...
When she looks at you, you almost have to look away...
But you are so afraid that she will disappear...
When she speaks to you...
Oh god, when she speaks to you...
It is as though there is not another living soul on earth...
It is when she says your name that...
Every inch, every freckle, every curve of your body will throb...
Parts of your body you dont even know the names to...
And when she catches you off guard...
When she uses that wicked talent that she owns...
Sensing all of your shields are down...
She will tear your pounding heart right out of your fragile chest...
You will be hers forever...
Her name is Ivy...
She is poisonous...
So utterly contagious...
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Re: Poison Ivy...
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 10:39:29 PM AEST
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| Captivating. Absolutely captivating. You have a natural talent. Your a true poet, and i believe it is I, that is the true lucky one to know you. |
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Re: Poison Ivy...
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 10:42:48 AM AEST
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wow intruging.. a very powerful write.. so much emotion and expression in this and such creativity.. I really like this piece
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Poison Ivy...
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 10:43:16 AM AEST
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| wow!! this is really good! Good writing!! |
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Re: Poison Ivy...
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 11:01:34 AM AEST
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Powerful and strong and sensual....
I'd like to know is Poison Ivy a person?
I enjoyed reading
Dee xx |
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Re: Poison Ivy...
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 04:30:41 PM AEST
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Oh, WOW, this is amazing! So creative! I love the ending.
"Her name is Ivy...
She is poisonous...
So utterly contagious..."
She's so dangrously beautiful.. I love it!
You expressed everything so well here!
5 stars would be understatement! Bravo!
-Drapes |
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Re: Poison Ivy...
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 06:48:56 PM AEST
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It is a Fabulous poem of love, wonderfully penned.
This is one such contagious (divine) poison that exist since Adam and eve.
FRANCO |
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