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Whenever Your With Me
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 03:01:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Upon a tree I carved your name
like little children do,then drew
an arrow through the heart as i
wrote i love you.
Oh it wasn't fancy just meant to
let you know, that like this tree
my love for you will forever grow.
I wrote a letter in the sand and
left it by the sea, beside a little
castle that i built for you and me.
It has a little fire place to keep
you warm at night, a window
seat and it's complete just add
the pale moonlight.
It over looks the endless shore
that reach'es for the sea, the
way that my arms reach for you
whenever your with me.
A most pleasant weekend to all.
myheartsvoice
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myheartsvoice
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2007-01-26 15:01:13]
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Re: Whenever Your With Me
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 03:14:09 PM AEST
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| What a beautiful poem. It made me smile. Great job. |
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Re: Whenever Your With Me
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by Crow on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 04:46:15 PM AEST
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| this is just outstanging" I really like it, good work. Crow |
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Re: Whenever Your With Me
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by Darkangelpoet07 on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 06:22:20 PM AEST
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Aww.. How sweet.. This is a very good poem. I love it!
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Re: Whenever Your With Me
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 08:22:06 PM AEST
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Absolutely Enchanting!!!
warmly glowin'~me |
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Re: Whenever Your With Me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 11:09:09 AM AEST
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beautifully expressed poem on love.. I love the stanzas and the wording.. you are truly talented at writing such great love and dedication poem.. awesome job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Whenever Your With Me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 05:38:53 PM AEST
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Yes I couldn't help myself I had to come past your pages and read your beautiful poetry.
Dreamy, romantic and heavenly beautiful. You are a skilled writer who has such a flare with a pen~ Well done and I so look forward to reading more of ur tremendous work.
Hoping your weekend was grand.
hugs,
sue m |
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