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Lines
Contributed by
Amielle
on
Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 06:37:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Adolescent hearts joined as one
As I can retell
Tough youth was fresh upon us
You were my parallel
We did sew our lives together
My heart strings turned to twine
We double stitched with care
That parallel of mine
Ignorance is not a bliss
I truly understand
Although I picked the seams
Ill sew it back by hand
I once shared your ignorance
But now Ive aged with care
Mature hearts are still fond of beating
Parallel, I share
There are still stitches
Yet you still repel
I now see you, right-angle
Of my parallel
Copyright ©
Amielle
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2007-01-26 18:37:34]
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Re: Lines
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 11:05:28 AM AEST
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this is a very creative write .. I like how you used sewing for the place of a young love and learning.. i enjoyed reading this
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Re: Lines
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 04:38:59 PM AEST
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I like the weaving as your words braid an homage to a dear childhood friend. Please keep writing and posting.
Good Job
Peace
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