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Why its so Good
Contributed by
Maryamu
on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 06:10:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Why its so good,
what is this Love,
Is it so true,
It comes from above
Help me my God,
Tell me my Lord,
what is this all,
Really about.....
Late until nights eyes wait to dream,
Something in heart flows like a stream,
Making this world for a moment so nice,
Tenderness rules over the wise. .....(Why its so good)
Seems like no one is really so bad,
Goodness in everyone which i see,
With every thought that in mind i had,
Being lonely makes us so free. .....(Why its so good)
When no one is there it makes us realize,
Sweetest memories tinkilng around,
About somone never thought of so nice,
Filling with joy like all it sound. .....(Why its so good)
Feeling like flower honey in me flows,
Someone like bee milesway knows,
Autmns are freezed springs are in forth,
Like everything is meant for us both.
Why its so good,
what is this Love,
Is it so true,
It comes from above
Help me my God,
Tell me my Lord,
what is this all,
Really about.....
By Mary Amulya
Copyright ©
Maryamu
... [
2007-01-27 06:10:54]
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Re: Why its so Good
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 27th January 2007 @ 10:54:39 AM AEST
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i really liked the approach you took with this.. it has a nice flow.. and I like how you ask God about what it is.. this is a very creative piece
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Why its so Good
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 10:37:45 AM AEST
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Maryamu, I really like the way you have composed this poem as the opening and the closing is very creative as the main body of the poem contains such warm emotions. I want to thank you for sharing a little of your creative personality with all of us and for producing such a heartfelt poem. As I close I would ask that you continue to write as you have produced a smile so bright. Thank You.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :) |
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