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Window to an empty soul
Contributed by
pam
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Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 03:44:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The surrounding fear
that doesn't touch me
but is always there
sees through me
through open windows
it finds me
holds me
and stays with me
alone in a dark room
I feel the presence enter
I am cold
I am ice
I am dead
Copyright ©
pam
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2002-07-29 15:44:55]
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Re: Window to an empty soul
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by chatabox on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 09:44:04 PM AEST
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tragic write Pam....but have you tried shutting the window and putting the light on.
dark images and powerfull writing Pam..... |
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Re: Window to an empty soul
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 07:47:17 AM AEST
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A gripping short piece Pam...well done
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