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IT'S OK.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 02:16:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i don't want to live
but it's ok
cuz i-know-i'll-fail
if i try again
echoes scream
but it's ok
i don't care
that i'm going insane
flash backs soar
but it's ok
i can see the door
but the key's missing!
i can't cry
but it's ok
i'm no good if i'm sad
any-way
mum is dead
but it's ok
the cancer went into her head
and she died in pain
my voice feels lost
but it's ok
i'm on a detox
and i'm NOT ok
... and i don't want to live
but IT'S OK
cuz i will fail
if i try again!
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2007-01-28 14:16:27]
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Re: IT'S OK.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 05:04:53 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful and emotional write.. it gives you that sense of "i am going to give up" but its a very well expressed piece sometimes things make people feel there is no hope
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