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Entertaining Tragedy
Contributed by
Chamaron
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Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 11:37:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Life is one letter off of a lie,
Two word message, but you missed whats inside.
Attack smart and make enemies fast,
Cruelty is the key to avenging the past.
So distorted, so messed up,
Forced a childs mind wide shut.
Lost in pain, looking for escape,
Wrong way out, its too late.
Read the letter, didnt understand,
How dare you call yourself a good man.
Dont ponder for a second that its your fault,
Blame it on the girl with wounds full of salt.
Anger rages, you cant control,
All the sense from you she stole.
But couldnt use it, you broke inside,
Replaced logic with screwed up lies.
Tries to discern, talks it over in a little room
Cries her heart out, shell give up soon.
Youll win and take your glory home,
It was all worth seeing the evil seed sown.
Muddled mind for the rest of her life,
See hatred in your grandchilds eyes.
But youll never dare to realize,
You messed up big time.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2007-01-28 23:37:32]
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Re: Entertaining Tragedy
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by xDiSaStErPiEcEx on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 05:53:25 AM AEST
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This was a great poem. you have some really amazing lines in there. and i loved the ending. some people really do mess up, eh? i don't know exactly how you feel, but i understand.
great write.[=
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