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deep down
Contributed by
maddie
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Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 11:49:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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lost in the world of your deep blue eyes
can't take my life, so sick of the lies
changing my view on life and on love
can't help but think to fly like a dove
feeling a bit hollow, so lost in the sorrow
stay close to me please, there's nothing to do
we'll never be free, the problems aren't new
Come to my window, I'll sneek out a night
never let go, keep holding me tight
You are the one, stay always in my heart
forever young, we will never part
faithfull to me, means true to yourself
don't you see love is better than wealth
Copyright ©
maddie
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2007-01-28 23:49:59]
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Re: deep down
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 10:40:23 AM AEST
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this is a very good write.. I enjoyed reading it .. I really liked the first stanza especially .. good job
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