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Lullaby
Contributed by
undead_poet14
on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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You held my hand when I learned to walk
You caught me when I fell
You danced with me to lull me to sleep
You were always there
No matter how old I get
Hell always be my daddy
Always keeping an eye out
So I dont get led astray
Ill always be your little girl
No matter how old I get
Ill still hug you
When you walk through the door
You take care of me when Im sick
And do everything you can to make me happy
And no matter what I do or where I go
Ill always be your little girl
You helped me to discover I could write
You told me I was special
You made me laugh
You made me smile
Ill always be your little girl
No matter how old I get
Ill still hug you
When you walk through the door
Youll always be my daddy...
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Re: Lullaby
(User Rating: 1 )
by Heavenangel on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 08:45:12 PM AEST
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| it is such a blessing to have a dad like that,dads can be so great in life,this was a remarkable poem,~heavenangel~ |
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Re: Lullaby
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by Bizzy on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 08:38:31 PM AEST
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| Dear Undead, I really like your poem. I'm not an educated critic of poetry. You write in a different style than I do, but I like the sound of it. You are a lucky girl to have a Daddy such as yours. Keep on writing! Great-grandma Bizzy |
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