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Silence
Contributed by
SilmorilM
on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 06:02:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The wound has reopened
Tears running from my eyes
Your body feels like burning home
When we tumble trough the sheets,
two bodies in one,
no shadow lies between us,
no room for doubt or remorse
and then
you re just another stranger
Your mind so afar,
your eyes cant bear mine
and silence overcomes us
Copyright ©
SilmorilM
... [
2007-01-30 06:02:05]
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Re: Silence
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by LouisaMontagu on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 09:07:33 AM AEST
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Wonderful! you have just described my wakening on Saturday morning! thank you
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Re: Silence
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 01:50:23 PM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful and expressively sad write.. I enjoyed reading this and loved the beginning and the end especially.. thanks for sharing
vampyress jenni |
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