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Chi King
Contributed by
yangdantien
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Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 04:43:20 PM in AEST
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Met a master,
a living crucible,
making a video.
In detail he fashioned 12 clay
statues that resembled
various birds from owl
to sparrow.
Then he whispered behind each:
"Off you go
up and away!"
Flight they attained
turning mud into
wings flapping,
feathers and chirps.
Hard facts in replay.
He demonstrated the script
where the first line starts:
"In the beginning God created
the heavens and the earth,"
The master then moved
acting out each syllable in gestures
like martial skills,
an earlier branch
of Tai Chi & Yoga
He began to teach that
each thrust applied to every sentence.
Hips undulate as water is stated.
Fists balled at the Apple.
Arms flung hard at Nephilim.
Legs kick with every beget.
A special flip & jump
at Adams funeral
not previously mentioned,
around the time of Noah's birth.
Muscles build in practice
swift and sure footed day after day,
this became a Shen Gong,
Kata or routine.
a way to ease the confusion
of the peoples.
The Old Book had 443,556 positions
The New had 1000 stances
each now accompanied by
the tongue pressed
against the soft palate.
The most intricate:
"In the beginning was the word,"
a wisdom retread
in stumbling force,
contrived to control
large numbers less
standing armies to police,
for sin equals
laws transgressed.
Lastly the format
develops a depth of voice,
any book will suffice
to inspire
the spirit,
in flesh to groom
becoming Light,
graced in action,
renewed with
precision & sweat
AJPIII
.
Copyright ©
yangdantien
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2007-01-30 16:43:20]
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Re: Chi King
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 06:00:49 PM AEST
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lovely imagery on martial arts.. I love the wording .. such beautiful wording. I love martial arts but don't pratice it lolz but it does intrigue me alot.. very nicely done
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Re: Chi King
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 06:06:38 PM AEST
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I love the power we bestow upon myths of orgin through ritual...though, I cannot claim myself well versed in the schools of thought &/or philosophys behind the, Martial Arts...I can, however, say that this felt good!
Greatly Expressive!!!
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 07:46:57 PM AEST
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I found this an interesting read my friend, the graphics fit it well. It was also powerful, loved the end line precission and sweat
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Re: Chi King
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by brew on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 08:57:09 PM AEST
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Tae Kown Do.........Yes, and martial arts free thy from seeing whats NOT there.it makes one..look and feel.
Beautiful artisry of words, as well as feelings.....You are talented
Brew~ |
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Re: Chi King
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 05:35:19 PM AEST
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An amazing damn write, once again. How I would love to pick your brain, my brother, fly and bounce along on those firing synapses. Hee Hee...me thinks it would be one hell of an interesting ride. With you..I read...I ponder...I read...I ponder and so on.
Thank you as always for doing that.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Chi King
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 05:50:50 PM AEST
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Dearest AJ~ Is there any subject that you can't write about? Fat chance huh? You're an absolute genuis my dear friend. I wish I was a molecule in your brain just to see how the mind of a sheer genius works.
Intriguing, fascinating and educating as always. I learn so much from you. Thank you so much for all the insight and information you stimulate my mind with. Brilliant stuff my dear friend.
Mother Earth smiles upon her precious son~
love n hugs from ur fan/friend,
sue m |
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Re: Chi King
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 05:34:22 PM AEST
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| That was a beautful and delicate poem. I do hope that you will write more! |
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Re: Chi King
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by CuriousitysCat on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 12:35:11 AM AEST
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Right on! This flowed so well it was amazing. The best part for me:
"Hips undulate as water is stated.
Fists balled at the Apple.
Arms flung hard at Nephilim.
Legs kick with every beget.
A special flip & jump
at Adams funeral
not previously mentioned,
around the time of Noah's birth."
This part made me feel like I was being let in on a secret, something special and unknown to the masses.
KeEp WrItInG
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Re: Chi King
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:24:04 PM AEST
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A lovely write and presentation which i related to at once . I to engaged in the martial arts in a younger day so i especially enjoyed this, In the style i took i practiced a form of moving zen called " Sanchin " it's been years now since i've done it but i apply it still mentaly to my major forte in life that of my family and of course my music which i've done ever since i was ten years old, writting and arranging music and playing the piano and the guitar. Nicely done this poem.
thank you also for your readership and comment.
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Re: Chi King
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by Ratwick on
Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 12:58:41 AM AEST
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This is the first poem I have ever read about martial arts and it captures the essence of what mastering any of them trys to achieve; serenity, understanding, strentgh, and peace with evrything. Ive studied Wing Chun a little bit and loved evry second of it, still practice the first Silum Dow (not how its spelled but how its pronounced), the equivelant to Katas or shen gong, and they do exactly that, ease confusion. Loved this one especially! Thanks again for posting!
Write On!
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