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Where have you been
Contributed by
Sinned
on
Tuesday, 30th January 2007 @ 10:30:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Where have you been
Like the song says I've been everywhere
Man I've been everywhere
Yet I've always very near
I've always thought of you and you'es
Believe me I speak truth'es
I've been happy and I've been brusied
Live goes on under skies black or blue
There were times I would peek in
Then again
I'd see a note "where have you been
My mind as blank as an empty bin
I've enjoyed my family and friends
Both of them
Write a poem I was a think'en
Even thought I'd take up drink'en
I surcumed
Ideas wouldn't come
Beat on my head like a drum
Always feeling a little dumb
Wish I could be like you and others
Crossing my mind,thoughts why bother
Then you'es gals and guys matter
Where have you been, O'brother
Your all like family to me, I smile
Have you seen aunt Nellie
No, not for a while
Winters been warm and chilly
I've come back to see you again
Losers lose and winners win
My name is Dennis I feel I've sinned
Believe me when I call you friend
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Sinned
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2007-01-30 22:30:13]
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Re: Where have you been
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 01:24:18 PM AEST
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I liked this write.. I loved the flow and the wording.. I especially liked the beginning. great job
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