|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Birthday Rose
Contributed by
lowman613
on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
|
Its morning now & your still not here,
You wont be till late I so fear,
Its ok,its just my birthday,
I did'nt have plans any way!
Just sitting at home waiting for you,
is pretty much all I ever do,
I know your trying hard to get home to me,
Theres a knock at the door,who could it be?
You sent me roses oh how sweet,
You didnt forget, a promise you did keep,
Its just another day alone I spend,
No calls from a special friend,
feeling selfish I do suppose,
But then I look at my birthday rose,
It all put a smile on my face,
made my day by your little grace,
To tell the truth,the best gift would have been,
Was to be able to hold you, I'll wait till then!
Copyright ©
lowman613
... [
2003-02-21 22:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Birthday Rose
(User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 10:30:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Celebration, Christina, Celebration, don't feel bad mine is in construction and sometimes I don't see him for months, I hope your boys gave you a good day, Mine drew me a picture again, Love and hugs to you! Val |
|
|
Re: The Birthday Rose
(User Rating: 1 )
by Heavenangel on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 11:18:48 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| CHRISTINA,HOW SAD FOR YOU, I HOPE HE WILL MAKE IT UP TO YOU WHEN HE GETS HOME,I DONT KNOW HOW YOU CAN STAND THAT,HANG IN THERE,BIRTHDAYS ARE NOT MUCH WHEN YOU GROW OUT OF THE CHILD STAGE.~HEAVENANGEL~ |
|
|
Re: The Birthday Rose
(User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 11:27:08 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| it will get better when he gets back home,,,iknow that he feels even worst,,than you,,knowing that he not there for you,,a friend in words,,spooky |
|
|
Re: The Birthday Rose
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 12:43:59 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Even though you are sad... your loving heart down poured its finest feelings in this poem. there are no empty words. it is brief and beautifully drawn. i feel this is a great write.
..venkat |
|
|
Re: The Birthday Rose
(User Rating: 1 )
by The-solo-subject on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 04:55:24 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
That was a good poem I was moved by the honesty of the subject
The-solo-subject |
|
|
Re: The Birthday Rose
(User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 02:22:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Such meloncholoy overtones, yet vivid and unfortunately realistic in many cases. Beautiful write. |
|
|
Re: The Birthday Rose
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ivy on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 11:04:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Your feelings are so well told in a verse. Very well written. |
|
|
Re: The Birthday Rose
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 07:30:28 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Funny thing about us men Christina, we're dumb. Special gene we share. But we love deeply just the same. We just can't see things sometimes. He loves ya !-Russ |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
