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Ode To The Drug User
Contributed by
Jazz
on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Crystal meth has stained your eyes.
No use for your weak disguise.
Your arms show the man made tracks,
where you went to far, and couldn't turn back.
Your hair is covered in cocaine residue.
Your lips are cracked, sore, and azure blue.
You hold that needle one more time,
knowing you walk a translucent line.
Ecstasy runs like blood in your veins.
I can see it's rapture, every time your neck strains.
Your bedazzled by it's shimmering illusions,
only to let it put you in pitiful confusion.
Down a dead end, you travel with the speed of light.
But what if you died tonight?
Or is that what you want, eternal flame?
Hey, you have only yourself to blame.
I say no more, I'm not the accuser.
I won't waste my time, on a drug user.
Copyright ©
Jazz
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2003-02-21 22:40:00]
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Re: Ode To The Drug User
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by roisin on
Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 11:03:26 PM AEST
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"i sit here watching you smoke your gear and to my eyes it brings a tear...you don't understand it's gear that taking lives..friends jumping, choking and don't forget the knives"...something from brass munkie..dublin..
rosie
so sad |
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Re: Ode To The Drug User
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by Percursors on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 01:28:29 AM AEST
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| This piece is really interesting u used great descriptive words and really made me feel sorry for this person and that’s when u know you’re a really good writer or poet when you can pull your readers in and make them picture what’s going on. |
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Re: Ode To The Drug User
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 06:04:09 AM AEST
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| this is not only terribly and depressingly true,,, you have presented it here quite accurately and very well written... blessings... |
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Re: Ode To The Drug User
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:46:45 AM AEST
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| wow...so sad... |
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